Wednesday, September 1, 2021

The big wave

It was ,may ,24th,2013. It was a sunny day, a time to

go for a lovely fish. I couldn't wait. I wanted to catch

some moon fish!

I know it's hard to find them but I found the perfect

spot where my family used to catch moon fish.

Knowing it was really flat, flatter than it has been in

a while, I still decided to go… now telling the story

I regret going on the water that day.

Well anyways I hopped in the boat and went off.

I know it's not the best idea but still…

We arrived right where we got the moon fish

,then I looked in the distance.

“That's weird” I whisper there this big wave coming…

that's random. I moved a bit closer to the big wave.

I realized then that there was a txunamy I didn’t

realize today was the day that I might DIE but I mean for sure I could survive!


I was hit by the wave. I could just hear my boat

breaking. I tried swimming up for help but it was

hopeless… I finally made it to the top of the surface.

The water was pulling me everywhere!

I did know what to do except go with the flow.

This was the scariest time of my life.

My mind was black I couldn’t think then all of a

sudden I stood on top of a bridge and saw my boat

broken in half.

 


Life's hard now but I still love it.

!THE END!


2 comments:

  1. WOW! Great work Chanel. Your story has a clear beginning, middle and end that is interesting and relatable

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  2. Very cool story Chanel. I like how your story describes your day leading up the picture of the broken ship. Thanks for sharing your work!

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